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by Katiemouse
February 9th, 2013, 1:35 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: After the Closing - YA Fantasy Query
Replies: 4
Views: 2555

Re: After the Closing - YA Fantasy Query

I've just done an updated version of above (the red text is the new stuff). But now perhaps I am giving them information overload. Dear Ms. Name I am querying you as I admire the fact that you took a risk in supporting a first-time author when you recognised talent. I think you would be a good fit f...
by Katiemouse
February 7th, 2013, 2:22 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: After the Closing - YA Fantasy Query
Replies: 4
Views: 2555

Re: After the Closing - YA Fantasy Query

Wow! Thank you both so much for your feedback, it really is invaluable :) I've taken both of your suggestions on board. I'd really appreciate if you could look at the updated version below. Also what cvalue do you think a personalised paragraph at the start has? for example at the start of this leet...
by Katiemouse
February 4th, 2013, 10:30 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: After the Closing - YA Fantasy Query
Replies: 4
Views: 2555

After the Closing - YA Fantasy Query

Hi All! I'm new here and promise to give some feedback on other queries. Below is my first attempt at a query for my YA novel After The Closing: The Voice. Any feedback would be appreciated. Don't be afraid to be harsh! Thanks :) Date Agents Name Agent Address Dear Ms. Name (Insert Personal Tidbit) ...