Nathan Bransford - The Forums

I appreciate any criticism on this; it's a first draft and I urge you to rip it to shreds! Dear Agent: Cecily Delahay is a Gifted harpist, a musician who possesses the ability to bring seven clockwork hummingbirds to life when she performs. This mean nothing to me since I have no idea what bringing...

Hi. I think you have some great ideas here, but I think the overall query needs some polishing and clarification. I've put my comments below in red-hope they help! Hi, I'm looking for some feedback on my blurb (or what I like to call a "written teaser trailer") for a yet untitled (three ye...