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- October 29th, 2012, 11:29 pm
- Forum: Excerpts
- Topic: First 500 Words of a Sci Fi Short
- Replies: 8
- Views: 6014
Great job! This is fast-moving and witty; your writing reminds me of Adam Rex's Smekday w/ the snark/humor/sci-fi. Only advice is to not move so fast through the first part of this story; you have voice (cherry and sprinkles), characters with heart (the chocolate fudge and nuts) but the context (ICE...
- October 27th, 2012, 6:46 pm
- Forum: Writing
- Topic: How many Characters do you have?
- Replies: 34
- Views: 12459
Great question! So many good answers... And yikes...looks like I'm ringing in at 26 and 1/2, or actually just 26; one character is a duel personality! This question made me ask whether he should count as one character or two... definitely one, because the duel complexity is what makes up his single ...