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by Mitchell
October 23rd, 2012, 4:06 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Perdition City Query
Replies: 3
Views: 1339

Re: Perdition City Query

Makes sense guys, I will re-post when redrafted.
by Mitchell
October 19th, 2012, 4:28 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: YA Dystopian Pitch
Replies: 4
Views: 1487

Re: YA Dystopian Pitch

I like the newest you posted, but I think there is a little "filler" in the wording that could be removed to strengthen it further: "Sixteen-year-old Maggie Spencer decides to conduct her own investigation when the police furtively [/color ]label her missing lab partner, Oliver McCray, a runaway. Sh...
by Mitchell
October 19th, 2012, 4:16 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Please Request Query Feedback: Literary/Avant-Garde
Replies: 4
Views: 3664

Re: Please Request Query Feedback: Literary/Avant-Garde

Hey Jane, Although the premise sounds interesting I have to admit I am thoroughly confused as to what the plot is, and where each character fits in... in particular Edwards relationships with Sarah and Irene. I am not sure what happened between Sarah and Edward, and what it has to do with Irene and ...
by Mitchell
October 16th, 2012, 1:42 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Perdition City Query
Replies: 3
Views: 1339

Perdition City Query

Hello all, Below is the query for my book, Perdition City. Any feedback or tips, rewrites, etc.. is of course greatly appreciated! Dear Agent, Customized introductory paragraph… The life of Perdition City has long been forgotten by those entrusted with it. A place corrupt where politicians’ scheme, ...