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- October 23rd, 2012, 4:06 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Perdition City Query
- Replies: 3
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Re: Perdition City Query
Makes sense guys, I will re-post when redrafted.
- October 19th, 2012, 4:28 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: YA Dystopian Pitch
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1833
Re: YA Dystopian Pitch
I like the newest you posted, but I think there is a little "filler" in the wording that could be removed to strengthen it further: "Sixteen-year-old Maggie Spencer decides to conduct her own investigation when the police furtively [/color ]label her missing lab partner, Oliver McCray, a runaway. Sh...
- October 19th, 2012, 4:16 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Please Request Query Feedback: Literary/Avant-Garde
- Replies: 4
- Views: 4015
Re: Please Request Query Feedback: Literary/Avant-Garde
Hey Jane, Although the premise sounds interesting I have to admit I am thoroughly confused as to what the plot is, and where each character fits in... in particular Edwards relationships with Sarah and Irene. I am not sure what happened between Sarah and Edward, and what it has to do with Irene and ...
- October 16th, 2012, 1:42 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Perdition City Query
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1662
Perdition City Query
Hello all, Below is the query for my book, Perdition City. Any feedback or tips, rewrites, etc.. is of course greatly appreciated! Dear Agent, Customized introductory paragraph… The life of Perdition City has long been forgotten by those entrusted with it. A place corrupt where politicians’ scheme, ...