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I like the newest you posted, but I think there is a little "filler" in the wording that could be removed to strengthen it further: "Sixteen-year-old Maggie Spencer decides to conduct her own investigation when the police furtively [/color ]label her missing lab partner, Oliver McCray, a runaway. Sh...
- October 19th, 2012, 4:16 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Please Request Query Feedback: Literary/Avant-Garde
- Replies: 4
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Hey Jane, Although the premise sounds interesting I have to admit I am thoroughly confused as to what the plot is, and where each character fits in... in particular Edwards relationships with Sarah and Irene. I am not sure what happened between Sarah and Edward, and what it has to do with Irene and ...
Hello all, Below is the query for my book, Perdition City. Any feedback or tips, rewrites, etc.. is of course greatly appreciated! Dear Agent, Customized introductory paragraph… The life of Perdition City has long been forgotten by those entrusted with it. A place corrupt where politicians’ scheme, ...