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by carollux
April 3rd, 2014, 2:44 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Carolina Chrysalis Genre: Women's Fiction As I pass through that second when all possibilities are suspended in time, I earnestly pray that the downhill rush ends in a quick merciful flight into space plunging to the river below. Melodramatic? Yeah just a bit, but driving alone through the Bl...
by carollux
July 12th, 2012, 9:59 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 285024

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: The Tea Cup Koan Genre: Female Lead Mystery Word Count 233 The Tea Cup Koan Nan-in, a Japanese master during the Meiji era (1868-1912), received a university professor who came to inquire about Zen. Nan-in served tea. He poured his visitor's cup full, and then kept on pouring. The professor w...