Nathan Bransford - The Forums

I know nothing about this stuff! Your coloring book series sounds interesting, fun, & useful. Shouldn't you indicate the target age/school level/reading level/whatever? I would leave out the second sentence of the first pgh. I don't think you need to tell the agent who the editor is--unless he/s...

You hooked me! I want to read your story. Scarred face--essential. Volkarei--explained sufficiently by the context you provide. No need for additional explanation/translation. Combine first 2 sentences by leaving out "should be the most powerful woman alive. Instead she". Omit last sentenc...