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by mariana
July 3rd, 2012, 12:05 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Eco-Kids: Level 1
Replies: 3
Views: 760

Re: Eco-Kids: Level 1

I know nothing about this stuff! Your coloring book series sounds interesting, fun, & useful. Shouldn't you indicate the target age/school level/reading level/whatever? I would leave out the second sentence of the first pgh. I don't think you need to tell the agent who the editor is--unless he/she s...
by mariana
July 3rd, 2012, 11:47 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: PRINCESS OF SWANS -- YA Fantasy
Replies: 12
Views: 2940

Re: PRINCESS OF SWANS -- YA Fantasy

You hooked me! I want to read your story. Scarred face--essential. Volkarei--explained sufficiently by the context you provide. No need for additional explanation/translation. Combine first 2 sentences by leaving out "should be the most powerful woman alive. Instead she". Omit last sentence of first...