Nathan Bransford - The Forums

Hey guys. So, I was wondering....where can I find some trust worthy beta readers? I have read over my paranormal YA novel over 20 times, and have even left it alone for 6 month to come back to it with fresh eyes, and I think it's about time I get some feed back. I have never done this before so I do...

I loved reading your feedbacks. It was nice of you all to share, and I admit... it did make me feel better. It's true, people do compare to get a better understanding. I know if someone is telling me I should watch/read/ play something they will add "It's like...." and it interests me.

Has any other writer stumbled upon this? I have, and hate it. I was very proud of my idea. But has anybody else had an idea, shared it and gotten back "Oh so it’s like -insert tittle of movie-book-anime-videogame". It could be just one thing in your idea that sends your listeners mind into...

I have to say that yes, it does make sense. I could try leaving it, and if all else fails....option B. But thank you so much for the help. It's very appreciated.

I understand. It's not harsh at all. I think it will be a difficult move because the world I created is so huge. Instead of info dumping, I spend some time giving bits of info over the few chapters. This includes why lead male has a sidekick and such. I could take it out, but it would be a long proc...

Hello Mr. Bradsford. Maybe as a former agent you can give me some insight. I have finished a supernatural romance, one I have read...and read..and read none stop to make it perfect. I queried agent but here is my delema... The story is about a demon contracting with a female, who he slowly falls in ...