Nathan Bransford - The Forums

Thank you so much Queenviv! I keep tweaking it, so hopefully I'm about there! Thanks for the input.

Okay. With the very helpful insights I've received....I've revised to this. Any further suggestions are completely welcome. I think this is much better than the first and is almost ready to start the submission process once again. Opinions?? Dear As far back as he can remember, his life as ETHAN WIL...

Thanks so much Kristie! I actually JUST rewrote the query this morning before reading your suggestions (very helpful btw!) I could use some input on which approach seems more appealing. I AM going to go back and adjust the last two paragraphs with your notes in mind though. Thanks so much for your s...

I think it sounds amazing. It certainly shows a very strong woman character, and I can relate almost instantly. My best friend struggled with these issues for years, and this character reminds me so much of the very humorous conversations we had. I think it will only be a matter of time before we'll...

Considering I'm here trying to get feedback for my own query... it sounds great to me. I'm far from an expert on query writing. It sounds like you included all the necessary information about the book, and the characters sound adorable for the age group they are trying to reach.

Ok. So after nearly a year of referring to this blog, I am finally going to ask for any and all suggestions about my query letter. I'm not offended easily, and I welcome all constructive criticism that will help me improve my projects. Thanks! :) Dear, Recently, ETHAN WILLIAMS has found himself unab...