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by Karma
June 20th, 2012, 5:24 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Eitan: Legacy of Light- YA fantasy
Replies: 7
Views: 2062

Re: Eitan: Legacy of Light- YA fantasy

Thank you so much Queenviv! I keep tweaking it, so hopefully I'm about there! Thanks for the input.
by Karma
June 19th, 2012, 3:47 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Eitan: Legacy of Light- YA fantasy
Replies: 7
Views: 2062

Re: Eitan: Legacy of Light- YA fantasy

Okay. With the very helpful insights I've received....I've revised to this. Any further suggestions are completely welcome. I think this is much better than the first and is almost ready to start the submission process once again. Opinions?? Dear As far back as he can remember, his life as ETHAN WIL...
by Karma
June 19th, 2012, 1:24 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Eitan: Legacy of Light- YA fantasy
Replies: 7
Views: 2062

Re: Eitan: Legacy of Light- YA fantasy

Thanks so much Kristie! I actually JUST rewrote the query this morning before reading your suggestions (very helpful btw!) I could use some input on which approach seems more appealing. I AM going to go back and adjust the last two paragraphs with your notes in mind though. Thanks so much for your s...
by Karma
June 19th, 2012, 10:28 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: Humorous Women's Fiction
Replies: 15
Views: 3744

Re: Query: Humorous Women's Fiction

I think it sounds amazing. It certainly shows a very strong woman character, and I can relate almost instantly. My best friend struggled with these issues for years, and this character reminds me so much of the very humorous conversations we had. I think it will only be a matter of time before we'll...
by Karma
June 19th, 2012, 10:17 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Eco-Kids: Level 1
Replies: 3
Views: 750

Re: Eco-Kids: Level 1

Considering I'm here trying to get feedback for my own query... it sounds great to me. I'm far from an expert on query writing. It sounds like you included all the necessary information about the book, and the characters sound adorable for the age group they are trying to reach.
by Karma
June 19th, 2012, 10:12 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Eitan: Legacy of Light- YA fantasy
Replies: 7
Views: 2062

Eitan: Legacy of Light- YA fantasy

Ok. So after nearly a year of referring to this blog, I am finally going to ask for any and all suggestions about my query letter. I'm not offended easily, and I welcome all constructive criticism that will help me improve my projects. Thanks! :) Dear, Recently, ETHAN WILLIAMS has found himself unab...