Nathan Bransford - The Forums

Thanks for your comments guys/gals - really helpful.

The offending phrase is going in the bin on grounds of dullness/telling-ness/POV switch. Onwards and upwards...

Hi all Could I have your thoughts on this: My MS is written in 3rd person close POV: the reader (er…me) sees only what the MC sees, only hears her internal thoughts. I have a scene where the MC reads a story from the newspaper (containing an Important Revelation (!)) out loud to friends. The next li...

Thanks guys - all really helpful stuff (especially the bit about cookies!)

Hey Bransforummers - I'd really appreciate your thoughts on the following problem I'm having with my (first) M/S: My MS is young adult fiction with a time travel theme. My main character is a 16 year old girl living in contemporary times. She has two sidekicks (same age as her): a boy also from 'now...