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by ElsieTanner
April 24th, 2012, 12:14 pm
Forum: Writing
Topic: POV - 3rd person slipping to omni??
Replies: 5
Views: 1322

Re: POV - 3rd person slipping to omni??

Thanks for your comments guys/gals - really helpful.

The offending phrase is going in the bin on grounds of dullness/telling-ness/POV switch. Onwards and upwards...
by ElsieTanner
April 20th, 2012, 6:35 am
Forum: Writing
Topic: POV - 3rd person slipping to omni??
Replies: 5
Views: 1322

POV - 3rd person slipping to omni??

Hi all Could I have your thoughts on this: My MS is written in 3rd person close POV: the reader (er…me) sees only what the MC sees, only hears her internal thoughts. I have a scene where the MC reads a story from the newspaper (containing an Important Revelation (!)) out loud to friends. The next li...
by ElsieTanner
April 19th, 2012, 10:41 am
Forum: Writing
Topic: Help! My main character has no character
Replies: 9
Views: 1588

Re: Help! My main character has no character

Thanks guys - all really helpful stuff (especially the bit about cookies!)
by ElsieTanner
February 13th, 2012, 11:18 am
Forum: Writing
Topic: Help! My main character has no character
Replies: 9
Views: 1588

Help! My main character has no character

Hey Bransforummers - I'd really appreciate your thoughts on the following problem I'm having with my (first) M/S: My MS is young adult fiction with a time travel theme. My main character is a 16 year old girl living in contemporary times. She has two sidekicks (same age as her): a boy also from 'now...