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by amirsdaddy
February 13th, 2012, 11:48 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: THE COLOR OF THE SOUL
Replies: 4
Views: 1145

Re: Query: THE COLOR OF THE SOUL

Thank you both for the feedback. I'll work on shortening the sentences and making them clearer. And yes, 40,000 words is a bit short by adult novel standards. Something I need to work on if I plan to sell this. I'm already working on a rewrite that includes some other scenes but that may only take i...
by amirsdaddy
January 29th, 2012, 7:55 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: THE COLOR OF THE SOUL
Replies: 4
Views: 1145

Query: THE COLOR OF THE SOUL

Despite having only ever known life as a slave in the Civil War South, John is a gentle giant of a man. When Polly Ann is bought at auction and brought to the plantation, John is instantly drawn to her stubborn, rebellious side as much as her angelic voice and beauty. John is emboldened and invigora...
by amirsdaddy
January 29th, 2012, 7:23 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Horror Query HONOR: A ZOMBIE TALE
Replies: 12
Views: 2304

Re: Horror Query HONOR: A ZOMBIE TALE

Two years ago, Honor’s best friend sent her an e-mail warning of a suspected outbreak. He then promptly disappeared. Honor prepares as the pandemic creeps across the globe. Infected souls wander through burned out cities. The media lies about the rising death rate. Governments institute massive cov...