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by Kate_WritesYA
December 17th, 2011, 2:49 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: SEA OF BLOOD AND SAND (YA Sci-Fi)
Replies: 8
Views: 2928

Re: SEA OF BLOOD AND SAND (YA Sci-Fi)

Thank you both! That's the sort of thing that is painfully obvious once someone says it. Ty has a temper, but he's not a bad or vicious guy. It's more that the world he lives in is very brutal, not him. I'm changing it to "savagely beats a blasphemer".
by Kate_WritesYA
December 16th, 2011, 3:35 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: YA Post-Apocalyptic: Bad Kids
Replies: 4
Views: 1173

Re: YA Post-Apocalyptic: Bad Kids

I've got a strong suspicion that Lewis is the serial killer. If that's the case, it's too obvious from this query.
by Kate_WritesYA
December 16th, 2011, 3:29 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: TENDER query - YA dystopian fantasy
Replies: 7
Views: 2024

Re: TENDER query - YA dystopian fantasy

First off, I absolutely want to read this, so the query did its job. I love the elements of faith, and I think this is a credible near-future, which is something I look for in my dystopians. I included some comments below. Here is a revised version. Thanks for your comments! ** Don’t be careful what...
by Kate_WritesYA
December 16th, 2011, 3:07 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: SEA OF BLOOD AND SAND (YA Sci-Fi)
Replies: 8
Views: 2928

SEA OF BLOOD AND SAND (YA Sci-Fi)

Please tear this to shreds, then light the shreds on fire. I'm thick-skinned, promise. Thank you in advance! Kate Dear AGENT NAME, The mission is simple: kill the hybrid, end the drought. Seventeen-year-old Ty thinks there's no way he'll have the honor of being drafted to face the man-beast hybrid. ...