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by cassiemcook
December 5th, 2011, 4:35 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query for Upper Middle Grade
Replies: 3
Views: 895

Query for Upper Middle Grade

I've had a little trouble getting some bites for this book. Any advice would be awesome!! There’s no way fourteen year old Jonathan Stevens is going to his first day of public school in May. So cutting class to wander around a park seemed like a better idea... until a storm forces him into a bathroo...
by cassiemcook
December 5th, 2011, 4:32 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: YA Fantasy: Where Hurricanes Sleep
Replies: 8
Views: 1744

Re: YA Fantasy: Where Hurricanes Sleep

Fifteen-year-old Jade Kadeem has it worse than your average Wind-Rider: I'm not sure I like the : here. Maybe just go with a period? This is of course, just nitpicky thing She can’t control her city-razing hurricanes, and her father was brutally murdered by those who can’t control the elements, the ...
by cassiemcook
December 5th, 2011, 4:14 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 213
Views: 120856

Re: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Dear Mr. Nathan Bransford, There’s no way fourteen year old Jonathan Stevens is going to his first day of public school in May. So cutting class to wander around a park seemed like a better idea... until a storm forces him into a bathroom stall, and he falls face-first into a giant hole caused by an...