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- October 24th, 2011, 10:07 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query: Avarice's Hoard - YA
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1438
Query: Avarice's Hoard - YA
When JJ, a Manhattan high school senior, finds and delivers a mysterious letter, he is unwillingly thrust into the heart of a conspiracy led by the dragon living under Central Park. Identified as the only person who can recover the magically hidden codex, JJ needs protection from the dragon's goons....
- October 24th, 2011, 10:02 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query:Life's What You Make It - YA
- Replies: 10
- Views: 4460
Re: Query:Life's What You Make It - YA
I'm new at this so take what I have to offer with a grain of salt. I like this one much better than the first. After spending and entire day reading the archives of the query shark I feel like the first paragraph is all set up and does not hook the reader into the story. The shark harps on leading w...