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by bstratford
October 24th, 2011, 10:07 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: Avarice's Hoard - YA
Replies: 2
Views: 682

Query: Avarice's Hoard - YA

When JJ, a Manhattan high school senior, finds and delivers a mysterious letter, he is unwillingly thrust into the heart of a conspiracy led by the dragon living under Central Park. Identified as the only person who can recover the magically hidden codex, JJ needs protection from the dragon's goons....
by bstratford
October 24th, 2011, 10:02 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query:Life's What You Make It - YA
Replies: 10
Views: 2354

Re: Query:Life's What You Make It - YA

I'm new at this so take what I have to offer with a grain of salt. I like this one much better than the first. After spending and entire day reading the archives of the query shark I feel like the first paragraph is all set up and does not hook the reader into the story. The shark harps on leading w...