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by astanton
October 15th, 2011, 1:40 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: CLICK Genre: Literary Fiction Words: 280 Andrew Manning didn’t want to kill his father, but his mother didn’t have the guts to do it herself. “He shouldn’t be in such terrible pain,” she said, standing behind Andrew, her hands clamped onto his shoulders. She pushed him forward; he didn’t resi...