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by LPVENDRELL
September 9th, 2011, 1:51 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: QUERY: THE RISE OF TEDDY
Replies: 1
Views: 648

QUERY: THE RISE OF TEDDY

Teddy, an overweight fantasy aficionado, is obsessed with the concept of the hero. He knows that even if nothing about him is heroic he has the mettle to become one … someday. At present, he has more pressing issues, like his job at the local gym. Never has he felt so inadequate. Life is a constant ...
by LPVENDRELL
August 29th, 2011, 4:28 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: Our conversations start at 4 a.m. (Adult: Romance)
Replies: 8
Views: 2165

Re: Our conversations start at 4 a.m. (Young Adult: Romance)

The short answer is yes. I would love to read more. If there is any more I would like to read it, please direct me to it. My favorite part was the description of his dad, and the bringing it back at the end. I laughed at that. The phrasing is wonderful, throughout. My only concern is that it reads a...
by LPVENDRELL
August 25th, 2011, 3:53 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: THE RISE OF TEDDY - FIRST 1000 Words
Replies: 3
Views: 1509

THE RISE OF TEDDY - FIRST 1000 Words

TITLE: THE RISE OF TEDDY GENRE: COMMERCIAL FICTION AUTHOR: LUIS VENDRELL The world laughed at him. It always had. Even alone in his car, it found a way to crush any hope for a day free of ridicule. A group of middle-school aged kids flicked cigarette ash onto the pavement outside. One pointed and th...
by LPVENDRELL
August 25th, 2011, 3:44 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 300889

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: THE RISE OF TEDDY Author: Luis Vendrell Word Count: 242 The world laughed at him. It always had. Even alone in his car, it found a way to crush any hope for a day free of ridicule. A group of middle-school aged kids flicked cigarette ash onto the pavement outside. One pointed and the rest lau...