Nathan Bransford - The Forums

Let me start by saying I think you have a nice starting premise. It feels sort of like an homage to The Giver. Already in the first chapter you've let in an appropriate amount of exposition, and you've introduced a lot of characters from which you can either create from them some backstory or leave ...

Title: Being Released Genre: Psychological Thriller (223 words, excluding heading) Part I: Asylum There was a creak, a thump, a slam, and then silence. It was all I heard, but it was enough for me to know that someone was joining me. Finally, somebody else was here. Whenever I get a new cellmate, it...