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by tessaloo
July 9th, 2011, 2:37 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

The Voice (working title) YA Fantasy 245 words The girl stood on the ridge overlooking the little village below, still shrouded in morning shadows and mist. A crooked smile emerged on her swollen mouth. Far too many mornings had passed here since she had first heard The Voice. Far too many. Khari sh...
by tessaloo
July 9th, 2011, 2:21 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: Guidelines for Posting Excerpts
Replies: 3
Views: 13960

Re: Guidelines for Posting Excerpts

Hi Marienne, Thanks for posting. I'm new here and appreciate reading your work. I have a question. I usually think of "Fantasy" as being about a world that does not actually exist and a society that is outside of what already exists in our world. Your story seems to be rooted in our world and the so...