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- July 9th, 2011, 2:37 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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The Voice (working title) YA Fantasy 245 words The girl stood on the ridge overlooking the little village below, still shrouded in morning shadows and mist. A crooked smile emerged on her swollen mouth. Far too many mornings had passed here since she had first heard The Voice. Far too many. Khari sh...
- July 9th, 2011, 2:21 pm
- Forum: Excerpts
- Topic: Guidelines for Posting Excerpts
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Hi Marienne, Thanks for posting. I'm new here and appreciate reading your work. I have a question. I usually think of "Fantasy" as being about a world that does not actually exist and a society that is outside of what already exists in our world. Your story seems to be rooted in our world and the so...