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by scootercarlyle
July 7th, 2011, 11:12 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: The Rider of Nealra Genre: Contemporary Fantasy "Uh, Ellie? Dat's really bent, dere." "No shit, Ole." Ole’s tendency to end every sentence with a slaughtered form of the word “there” made me want to open me a can of bitch slap, but I chided myself for snapping at one of my dad’s oldest friend...