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- July 16th, 2011, 7:14 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query: SWANSONG: THE FALLEN Sci-fi thriller
- Replies: 10
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Re: Query: SWANSONG: THE FALLEN Sci-fi thriller
Lets of great food for thought there, thanks guys! I'll have a good long work on this and post up the result.
- July 13th, 2011, 11:32 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query: SWANSONG: THE FALLEN Sci-fi thriller
- Replies: 10
- Views: 4443
Re: Query: SWANSONG: THE FALLEN Sci-fi thriller
These are some really great and helpful comments, great food for thought! I've had a good long workup on the query and come up with some changes. Hopefully this will make the query stronger still? (Just as a side note, the entire platoon experience missing time after taking part in the experiment. T...
- July 6th, 2011, 4:06 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query: SWANSONG: THE FALLEN Sci-fi thriller
- Replies: 10
- Views: 4443
Re: Query: SWANSONG: THE FALLEN Sci-fi thriller
Thanks for the great critiques guys! It's really encouraging to know that the story line is good! Okay, I've had a go at fleshing it out as pointed out in the edits. How is this? Dear Great sage of Agenty wisdom, In the blink of an eye, the world's children vanished, taken by an alien power intent o...
- July 5th, 2011, 12:43 pm
- Forum: Town Hall
- Topic: The Introduction Thread
- Replies: 647
- Views: 413629
Re: The Introduction Thread
Hi all! I've been a long-time reader of Nathan's blog and finally decided that just reading wasn't going to be as much fun as taking part in the forum! By way of introduction I'm an adult Science Fiction/ Speculative Fiction writer in my spare time, really hoping to get my work published in the trad...
- July 5th, 2011, 12:02 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query: SWANSONG: THE FALLEN Sci-fi thriller
- Replies: 10
- Views: 4443
Query: SWANSONG: THE FALLEN Sci-fi thriller
I would dearly welcome your critique of my query letter! Dear Agenty person, In the blink of an eye the world's children vanished, taken by an alien power intent on killing or enslaving those left behind. A platoon of British soldiers, led by rookie Lieutenant Joseph Branston, experienced missing ti...