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by BlackSuit
July 16th, 2011, 7:14 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: SWANSONG: THE FALLEN Sci-fi thriller
Replies: 10
Views: 2283

Re: Query: SWANSONG: THE FALLEN Sci-fi thriller

Lets of great food for thought there, thanks guys! I'll have a good long work on this and post up the result. 8-)
by BlackSuit
July 13th, 2011, 11:32 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: SWANSONG: THE FALLEN Sci-fi thriller
Replies: 10
Views: 2283

Re: Query: SWANSONG: THE FALLEN Sci-fi thriller

These are some really great and helpful comments, great food for thought! I've had a good long workup on the query and come up with some changes. Hopefully this will make the query stronger still? (Just as a side note, the entire platoon experience missing time after taking part in the experiment. T...
by BlackSuit
July 6th, 2011, 4:06 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: SWANSONG: THE FALLEN Sci-fi thriller
Replies: 10
Views: 2283

Re: Query: SWANSONG: THE FALLEN Sci-fi thriller

Thanks for the great critiques guys! It's really encouraging to know that the story line is good! Okay, I've had a go at fleshing it out as pointed out in the edits. How is this? Dear Great sage of Agenty wisdom, In the blink of an eye, the world's children vanished, taken by an alien power intent o...
by BlackSuit
July 5th, 2011, 12:43 pm
Forum: Town Hall
Topic: The Introduction Thread
Replies: 630
Views: 241353

Re: The Introduction Thread

Hi all! I've been a long-time reader of Nathan's blog and finally decided that just reading wasn't going to be as much fun as taking part in the forum! By way of introduction I'm an adult Science Fiction/ Speculative Fiction writer in my spare time, really hoping to get my work published in the trad...
by BlackSuit
July 5th, 2011, 12:02 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: SWANSONG: THE FALLEN Sci-fi thriller
Replies: 10
Views: 2283

Query: SWANSONG: THE FALLEN Sci-fi thriller

I would dearly welcome your critique of my query letter! Dear Agenty person, In the blink of an eye the world's children vanished, taken by an alien power intent on killing or enslaving those left behind. A platoon of British soldiers, led by rookie Lieutenant Joseph Branston, experienced missing ti...