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by jojocookie
May 3rd, 2012, 12:27 pm
Forum: Synopses and Plot Outlines
Topic: Basic plot outline
Replies: 3
Views: 4320

Re: Basic plot outline

I think it is very good. You have enough there to make me want to read more.
by jojocookie
March 6th, 2012, 6:57 am
Forum: Writing
Topic: How do you write
Replies: 14
Views: 1981

Re: How do you write

At 5:00 a.m. to 7:00 a.m. Then I go to work.

I'm a morning person.
by jojocookie
March 2nd, 2012, 10:11 am
Forum: Writing
Topic: What do you do well?
Replies: 28
Views: 3773

Re: What do you do well?

Sticking with it.

Till everyone says they feel ignored, neglected and mad at me.
by jojocookie
March 2nd, 2012, 9:51 am
Forum: Writing
Topic: What is your writing weakness? (Let's call this therapy)
Replies: 54
Views: 13562

Re: What is your writing weakness? (Let's call this therapy)

Keeping at it.

Then everyone tells me they feel ignored, neglected and are mad at me.
by jojocookie
December 16th, 2011, 3:50 pm
Forum: Ask Nathan
Topic: New font for a dream scene?
Replies: 1
Views: 1022

New font for a dream scene?

I have seen this in novels. The use of a different font for a dream scene. Do the rules change when the time comes to submit the MS? Should I stick with Times New Roman throughout? Also are webdings out of the question? Thought I would put them in to show the scene has changed. I have seen this also.
by jojocookie
November 4th, 2011, 3:08 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 282954

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Vanished YA Chapter One Lola “Where am I?” Sitting up I rub my eyes and look around. All I can see are big and small shadows. Nothing is making sense. My hand brushes against the wall feeling bumpiness and peeling paint. “Wait a minute. I don’t remember this. It isn’t my room, what is it?” A small a...
by jojocookie
June 30th, 2011, 7:50 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 282954

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title : A secret Genre: PB Sniffy, Miffy and Bizz live together in a hilly pocket. They spend their days in the shadow of a secret. A secret that no one knows. Until one fair morning. . . Sniffy had his mind made up. Today was the day. He studied the steep incline. "Maybe they can’t find the secret....