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- December 4th, 2020, 9:33 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Title: The Patchwork Mansion Genre: Fantasy Jane Bane was alone. She lived with her father, but he was hard and cruel, and his cruelty made Jane feel more alone than if she had no contact with anyone at all. When she wasn’t in school, she spent her time cleaning and cooking at home, which was a one-...
- June 30th, 2011, 12:32 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Title: Jean Bean and the Patchwork Mansion Genre: YA Word Count: 266 Jean Bean. That was the name she was given at birth. She was mousy, wafer-thin, and painfully shy, and as a result, in the habit of escaping into her imagination. But her dad didn’t like her daydreaming. “Get your damn, fool head o...