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by acbc7681
June 7th, 2011, 8:21 am
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: first pages of new book
Replies: 4
Views: 1329

Re: first pages of new book

thanks for the advice! i really didn't like the beginning either after i re-read and re-read it. i'm in the process of changing it up and will post again after it's revised! thank for the advice again!!
by acbc7681
June 5th, 2011, 12:21 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: First Chapter CURSED YA paranormal thriller
Replies: 5
Views: 1465

Re: First Chapter CURSED YA paranormal thriller

I really like what you have here. It is really well written and made me want to read more. I'm not sure I'm te absolute best critic since I am a new writer working on my first book, but I really like it. The story sounds interesting and the characters really form an image in your head.
by acbc7681
June 5th, 2011, 11:52 am
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: first pages of new book
Replies: 4
Views: 1329

first pages of new book

hey everyone, i just wanted to post the two pages of my book for feedback. thanks so much! title: the devil's touch. genre: not sure about that, historical fiction or autobiographical novel, it's based on the life and murder of my sister from her point of view and my point of view on her life. I re-...