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by Janell Williams
July 3rd, 2011, 8:39 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 308401

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: TO DATE & DIE IN NY Genre: Urban Fantasy 300 words Profile: Syrensong I’m looking for the thought of love in the twinkle of a soul. I’ve closed my eyes to wish for it. Then I saw you. Alone as I, you understood, you accepted. Come dance with me, come sail my torrent sea. Female, 21, 5’7”, bi-...
by Janell Williams
June 24th, 2011, 10:21 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 213
Views: 134983

Re: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Syrena will kill. She just doesn't know it yet. Men are dangerous, or so Syrena's mother tells her. Throughout her childhood, they flee from one small town to another, and with each move Syrena watches the bizarre fear of men grow in her mom. When her mom dies suddenly, and Syrena is forced to ventu...
by Janell Williams
June 1st, 2011, 9:57 am
Forum: Connect With a Critique Partner
Topic: Urban Fantasy Novel
Replies: 1
Views: 1080

Urban Fantasy Novel

Syrena will kill. She just doesn't know it yet. Men are dangerous, or so Syrena's mother tells her. Throughout her childhood, they flee from one small town to another, and with each move Syrena watches the bizarre fear of men grow in her mom. When her mom dies suddenly, and Syrena is forced to ventu...