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- August 5th, 2011, 9:40 pm
- Forum: Writing
- Topic: 250 Word Sharathon--post the opening of your WIP
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Hey Shirley!
This is the first 250 words of my middle grade fiction story. It's been revised 4 times already. It's really different than most of the posts I have read. So, here goes: Winston was anxious to be out of eyesight of the students on bus 12-88 from Toad Suck Elementary. Just a few more steps and he’d b...
- May 22nd, 2011, 12:14 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Title: Hey, Shirley! Genre: Middle-grade fiction Word count: 233 words Winston was anxious to be out of eyesight of the students on bus 12-88 from Toad Suck Elementary. Just a few more steps and he’d be around the corner of Newton Avenue. He could feel the big gloopy mass on the back of his neck beg...