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by dms0525
April 21st, 2011, 12:14 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query TORN YA sci fi
Replies: 6
Views: 1492

Re: Query TORN YA sci fi

Here's my latest attempt: Dear Super Star Agent: TORN is a young adult science fiction complete at 87,000 words. Sixteen year old Julia Phillips buries herself in guilt after killing her best friend Monica in a car accident. Julia awoke in the hospital with a broken leg, a new talent for drawing and...
by dms0525
April 21st, 2011, 11:51 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Blood Legacy - YA Query REVISED x1
Replies: 6
Views: 1422

Re: Blood Legacy - YA Query

. Dear [Agent], I am a regular reader of your blog and I believe my YA fantasy, BLOOD LEGACY, would be a good fit for your agency. It is a complete at 84,000 words. Dani Strider knows her mother’s death wasn’t natural. A shadow stole her life hours after Dani was born. But no one would believe that....
by dms0525
April 21st, 2011, 11:33 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: NOCTURNAL, psychological thriller
Replies: 6
Views: 1427

Re: NOCTURNAL, psychological thriller

Hey all, this is the first draft of my query for my new novel NOCTURNAL. (also still in first draft) All comments welcome. Dear (agent name here): When FBI profiler Reardon Meeks goes to Albuquerque to help find a serial killer, clues left at the crime scenes begin not only to reveal a profile of t...
by dms0525
April 21st, 2011, 11:20 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query TORN YA sci fi
Replies: 6
Views: 1492

Re: Query TORN YA sci fi

Thank you both so much! Your input has been really helpful! Off to work on query!

Denise
by dms0525
April 21st, 2011, 12:03 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query TORN YA sci fi
Replies: 6
Views: 1492

Query TORN YA sci fi

I have a revised query below. I'm polishing up my MS and I need my query letter to shine! Any and all suggestions/comments are appreciated! --------- Dear Super Star Agent: Sixteen year old Julia Phillips buries herself in guilt after killing her best friend Monica in a car accident. Julia awoke in...