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by guerillapanda
February 24th, 2011, 11:17 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: The Scroll of Chaos Genre: YA contemporary fantasy Word count: 235 Riding through Chinatown always reminded Iron of a video game. Avoid the trucks. Pedal fast, pass the cable car. Don’t run over the jaywalkers. Most importantly: keep moving. Even so, he couldn’t help slowing down when approac...