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by Janet_T
February 23rd, 2011, 2:09 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: THE DIM- New Query
Replies: 8
Views: 1242

Re: THE DIM- New Query-REVISION

What do you think?? *eek* After Hope Walton loses her awesome mom in a stupid, freakin’ earthquake, not even a mountain of pills could numb her pain. While in rehab, she receives a visit from her reclusive aunt, who brings her a photo of a 500 year-old painting. Hope doesn’t give a rat’s ass about a...
by Janet_T
February 23rd, 2011, 11:24 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: THE DIM- New Query
Replies: 8
Views: 1242

Re: THE DIM- New Query

Thanks, Netti- I look forward to your comments. :)

Wow..quill-- that is an AWESOME critique. I cannot thank you enough.
You rock!

I'll work on it, based on your advice.
by Janet_T
February 23rd, 2011, 10:03 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: THE DIM- New Query
Replies: 8
Views: 1242

THE DIM- New Query

Hello, I'm super new at this,and I'm really confused about something. I submitted my query to the queryshark--and got to a yes after 3 revisions. Yet.. out of 20-some odd queries, I've only gotten 1 partial request. I know it's SUPER early. But I want to nip the problem in the bud, if I can. What do...
by Janet_T
February 23rd, 2011, 9:56 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: The Thorn Tree - YA Paranormal
Replies: 11
Views: 2045

Re: The Thorn Tree - YA Paranormal

Carolyn Lepworth suspects her mom had a lot of secrets. I think I'd mention the death right here, make it more central to the story. The longer they stay hidden, the more people die. And she thought living in New Hampshire would be boring. I love that sentence. John Lanford, a corrupt 19th century ...