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- July 1st, 2011, 11:37 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Kate La Vincero Women's Fiction 196 words Louisville, Kentucky, March 6, 1859 After a short curtsy, the maid glanced down and mumbled, “Mr. James, he’s downstairs, in the good parlor. He says to tell you he’ll wait for you.” The maid kept her eyes on the floor and fidgeted with her crucifix. Isabel,...
- February 21st, 2011, 12:40 am
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Title: The Garnet Brooch Genre: popular fiction Word count: 252 “A fake, what do you mean, my inheritance is a fake?” I almost shriek, but my sister Bobbie doesn’t react. She is maddingly calm. From her phone a thousand miles away in Indianapolis, she explains that the garnet brooch is just red glas...