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by Chris Qualls
October 18th, 2019, 6:19 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 46
Views: 23442

Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

TITLE: Surfing On The Edge Of Creation GENRE: Science Fiction 1st Page: 238 words. The surfer, clad in a red metallic body mesh, guided his robotic surf board through the chum that rose with the big wave as it neared the beach. The lights on one side of the board flashed wildly as it altered its cou...
by Chris Qualls
February 18th, 2011, 2:07 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 284978

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: A Phantasm in Time Genre: Science Fiction Full story word count: 19,991. Page one word count: 255 CHAPTER 1 Laughing, the woman pulled a man beneath the sheets as the lights of the Las Vegas Strip cast a kaleidoscopic glow into the room. As the two rolled in passion, an apparition stared at t...