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by semckitrick
February 17th, 2011, 9:35 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Genre: Paranormal Romance Title: Memories Here's the first 252 words: Jack VanAllen pushed his way through the crowd as they gyrated and bounced to the music. Booming bass and beating drums reverberated in his chest and invaded his ears. Cigarette smoke hovering overhead assaulted his nose. What a w...