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by shelldolb
February 17th, 2011, 3:18 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Past Sins Genre: Fiction/Suspense/Thriller Word Count: 237 Prologue Steven stood in front of the jury box consisting of five women and seven men. He knew before he even gave his closing argument that he was about to lose his very first case. Had it been any other case other than this one, he ...
by shelldolb
February 17th, 2011, 3:13 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 456021

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Sorry for the second post. I had computer tec error come up and didn't realize that it had posted alreday.