Thank you Dankrubis,
I appreciate your critique and I'm sure you will be seeing more excerpts from me soon as I start the rewrite ofmy novel in the coming days.
Thank you again!
Ghostwriter
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- January 29th, 2011, 11:14 am
- Forum: Writing
- Topic: Your first Pargraph!
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- January 29th, 2011, 11:11 am
- Forum: Writing
- Topic: Your first Pargraph!
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Re: Your first Pargraph!
Thank you so much! I am finishing up the last few chapters of the novel and will start soon on the dreaded "rewrite".
Your critique is invaluable to me and I do appreciate it.
Best,
Ghostwriter
Your critique is invaluable to me and I do appreciate it.
Best,
Ghostwriter
- January 28th, 2011, 11:21 am
- Forum: Writing
- Topic: Your first Pargraph!
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The Long Road to Extradition - first paragraph!
Thanks to Nathan for starting this journey... ALL feedback requested and much appreciated! In a matter of seconds, I witnessed the deaths of my parents and oldest brother. It was then that I realized that my lonely childhood had come to a reverberating halt. This moment in time would forever be sear...