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- February 11th, 2010, 11:10 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: rip my first query to shreads!!
- Replies: 6
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Re: rip my first query to shreads!!
Nessa, putting it out there takes a lot of courage, good for you. My suggestion, for your first paragraph, is that you try what Noah Lukeman ( First Five Pages ) suggests, write one sentence that will super glue your query in the agent's hand. First paragraph idea: Lydia and Jake set out on a journe...
- February 11th, 2010, 10:42 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query: Through Fire and Ice (NEW VERSION!)
- Replies: 14
- Views: 6657
Re: Query: Through Fire and Ice
Credit for the following good advice goes to The Query Wizard -- Molli Nickell. She pointed out our query should include: the hook, the book, and the cook. The hook : One side will mean the end of Jana's career and life as she knows it. The other will condemn her to years of unacceptable monotony. B...