Nathan Bransford - The Forums

I think someone asked this in the comments section of a blog post once, but hell if I can find it! Anyway.. If a writer approached you with a contract in hand from a house, would you have any feelings about that positively or negatively? Is it a 'great this guy just saved me a ton of work!' or a 'I ...

I summarize chapter by chapter and then write something that looks nothing like my outline. :)

Just to piggy back off of Ms Moore's comments, I think you need a stronger hook. On his first day at the Magi Academy, Nicholas Benson was shocked to discover that he shared a classroom with Joselyn Jameson, the daughter of the Queen. As their rigorous training commenced, Nicholas and Joselyn became...