Nathan Bransford - The Forums

Thanks to all of you who responded. Your feedback was very helpful and you gave me a much to consider. I do have a followup question on etiquette for you veteran writers. Is it "appropriate" to requery an agent you've already queried with a revised letter? Or should I revise and move on to...

Dear [Agent Name], Wil Drake, a discharged U.S. Air Service pilot, has survived the last eight years of the 1920s as a booze smuggler in the American South. It’s a lonely existence, but he likes it that way. Had he known that his decision to attend a weekend dog racing event at a shady hotel in New ...