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by rob
November 20th, 2010, 10:55 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Query Critique Friday 11/19/10
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Re: Query Critique Friday 11/19/10

Candida (space) - The Making Of A (of a) Princess When twenty-seven year old (hyphens are important. Are there twenty-seven year olds or one person who is twenty-seven-years old?) Candida (not convinced by the name) began pondering (ponders – it’s active and present tense, plus one less word) her pl...