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by jillian
October 24th, 2010, 12:35 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Revilo Jillian Dimitriou Genre: Young Adult Fantasy 230 words My mom gestured towards the sandwich she made me. She looked like Vanna White modeling a new car. Smoke rose off the burnt exterior as she slid the plate to me. The gray disappeared but the scent lingered. I pulled at an onion slic...