Nathan Bransford - The Forums

You need to go to the Home page and the FAQ's button is on the upper right corner. If you click on the faq button on the top of a forum page (like this one), it takes you to the administrator faqs. Short answer? Don't query in the weeks around major holidays or when it's posted that the agent will b...

Also you allude to Letty's secrets, then they play no further part in the query. Something like.... "Letty Whittaker, Phsychotherapist and recovering alcoholic, is about to learn that no good deed goes unpunished ") Hi Hillsy, Thanks for your input. Actually, Letty's secrets have to do wit...

Whoops, just realized I named Wayne, but never said clearly who he was. I'll be substituting "the boyfriend" for "Wayne."
TW

Here's my revised version. I'm wavering on the "beans, beans" line. People either love it or hate it--so it might just be to iffy to keep in. On the other hand, if I take it out the query seems bland and de-sparkled. At any rate, I so appreciate everyone's comments and advice. If I didn't ...

Wonderful advise from everyone. I'm pondering it all and making revisions. I'll post the changes in a bit, but I wanted to say how grateful I am to everyone for their input. It's invaluable!
Donna Glaser/TW

Dear ---, It’s called the fight or flight instinct, but in reality it is a probability analysis made from thousands of pieces of data that occurs over the course of seconds, hours, or days. The analysis changes and evolves with the situation and the severity of the outcome – the result determines wh...

I've posted the revised version about 6-7 posts below. Many thanks, mighty critiquers!! I would love to get objective opinions on my query. I'm tough skinned, and interested to see how others feel about it. Thanks, in advance. TW Dear Awesome Agent: Psychotherapist Letty Whittaker, a professional s...