Nathan Bransford - The Forums

Emily - Your fine. Sorry my response is delayed. Been working a lot and then dealing with kids on top of it. Sometimes I just need an escape which helps me work through what ever I am struggling with. And beyond all that I need the critism anyway. Writing for me is like a game to a gamer, it present...

ALl of you thank you for taking a few minutes helping to work at my efforts a little better. I will make revisions and of course pick the correct tense to use. I think I will make sure things are polished a bit better before posting. My apologies as I am sure it is seen as sloppy and annoying. Thank...

D.t. Thank you so much and that is exactly what I needed, dont worry about being critical. Its how I will get better. I am glad I caught your attention. I haven't been on writing forums to much but I hope to give good feed back as you just did for me. Again, thank you for a bit of your time and inte...

This is the start of a story that I have recently pulled back out, I had put it away for awhile. As with most things in life when you have something stuck in your head that wants to wrok it way out onto to paper it becomes hard to ignore. Slowly I am convincing myself this going somewhere. Here is a...