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- April 7th, 2010, 2:23 pm
- Forum: Procrastination
- Topic: Favorite quote
- Replies: 55
- Views: 31386
Re: Favorite quote
A few of my favorites: * Go confidently in the direction of your dreams. Live the life you have imagined – Henry David Thoreau * Commitment leads to action. Action brings your dreams closer – Eleanor Roosevelt * Success is the sum of small efforts repeated day in and day out – Robert J. Collier * Th...
- April 7th, 2010, 10:05 am
- Forum: Procrastination
- Topic: Contest for YA writers
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1413
Re: Contest for YA writers
Great find. Thanks for the link!
- December 17th, 2009, 2:32 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query Help: Museum Chronicles
- Replies: 12
- Views: 6983
Re: Query Help: Museum Chronicles
Thank you for the feedback. Back to the drawing board.
- December 16th, 2009, 10:40 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query Help - Hacked -Third round
- Replies: 10
- Views: 5040
Re: Query Help - Hacked
I don't have much else to add. Tzalaran and Hillsy did a great job covering my questions with the query. I just wanted to comment that I really like the premise. Looking forward to reading your revision!
- December 16th, 2009, 10:33 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Two queries for Epertase- Which to use?
- Replies: 13
- Views: 5545
Re: Two queries for Epertase- Which to use?
Definitely the first one! I like the way you set up the plot and outlined the stakes. I've been reading your query progress (just have not commented yet) and you've made a lot of excellent changes. Well done.
- December 16th, 2009, 10:30 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query Help: Museum Chronicles
- Replies: 12
- Views: 6983
Re: Query Help: Museum Chronicles
Again, I would like to thank everyone for their feedback. Here's R1: Everything about museums is a lie. The world’s most powerful organization, known only as The Society , controls the museums of the world. One of their best cover ups of all time is that artifacts must be shielded from the elements ...
- December 15th, 2009, 5:21 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query Help: Museum Chronicles
- Replies: 12
- Views: 6983
Re: Query Help: Museum Chronicles
Thanks to everyone for the feedback so far. I appreciate it.
Good catch, Tricia. And rest assured, it doesn't start with a dream. =)
Good catch, Tricia. And rest assured, it doesn't start with a dream. =)
- December 15th, 2009, 3:17 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query Help: Museum Chronicles
- Replies: 12
- Views: 6983
Re: Query Help: Museum Chronicles
Hi Alexandra, Thank you so much for your feedback. I appreciate you taking time to review this and give me your thoughts. I'm not sure if this clarification helps, since I realize you provided your feedback at face value. 1. Your PoV question brings up a good point. I will look at rewording. 2. I re...
- December 15th, 2009, 1:28 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query Help: Museum Chronicles
- Replies: 12
- Views: 6983
Query Help: Museum Chronicles
Feedback appreciated. /deep breath: When thirteen-year-old Grey Hawkins is awakened by a terrifying vision of an attempted murder, she never dreamed it would trigger an event that caused her to transport to Ancient Egypt. Her unexpected disappearance propels the world’s most visibly clandestine orga...
- December 9th, 2009, 2:10 pm
- Forum: Finding An Agent
- Topic: Rhetorical Question...question
- Replies: 3
- Views: 3174
Rhetorical Question...question
Before Nathan's head explodes, let me put this out here - this is not about starting queries with rhetorical questions. I promise, I have read the blog topic on this: http://blog.nathanbransford.com/2006/10/should-i-use-rhetorical-questions-in-my.html. Again, for Nathan...put the knife down...this i...