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A few of my favorites: * Go confidently in the direction of your dreams. Live the life you have imagined – Henry David Thoreau * Commitment leads to action. Action brings your dreams closer – Eleanor Roosevelt * Success is the sum of small efforts repeated day in and day out – Robert J. Collier * Th...

Great find. Thanks for the link!

Thank you for the feedback. Back to the drawing board.

I don't have much else to add. Tzalaran and Hillsy did a great job covering my questions with the query. I just wanted to comment that I really like the premise. Looking forward to reading your revision!

Definitely the first one! I like the way you set up the plot and outlined the stakes. I've been reading your query progress (just have not commented yet) and you've made a lot of excellent changes. Well done.

Again, I would like to thank everyone for their feedback. Here's R1: Everything about museums is a lie. The world’s most powerful organization, known only as The Society , controls the museums of the world. One of their best cover ups of all time is that artifacts must be shielded from the elements ...

Thanks to everyone for the feedback so far. I appreciate it.

Good catch, Tricia. And rest assured, it doesn't start with a dream. =)

Hi Alexandra, Thank you so much for your feedback. I appreciate you taking time to review this and give me your thoughts. I'm not sure if this clarification helps, since I realize you provided your feedback at face value. 1. Your PoV question brings up a good point. I will look at rewording. 2. I re...

Feedback appreciated. /deep breath: When thirteen-year-old Grey Hawkins is awakened by a terrifying vision of an attempted murder, she never dreamed it would trigger an event that caused her to transport to Ancient Egypt. Her unexpected disappearance propels the world’s most visibly clandestine orga...

Before Nathan's head explodes, let me put this out here - this is not about starting queries with rhetorical questions. I promise, I have read the blog topic on this: http://blog.nathanbransford.com/2006/10/should-i-use-rhetorical-questions-in-my.html. Again, for Nathan...put the knife down...this i...