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- August 24th, 2010, 10:26 am
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Replies: 720
- Views: 458174
Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Title: The Greenberg Conspiracy Genre: Polit-thriller James Brightman glanced at the dimly shimmering digits of the clock on the dashboard of his Jeep. It showed half past nine. He was already thirty minutes late and needed another ten to reach his office in the Lloyd Investment Bank across West Str...
- December 18th, 2009, 4:46 pm
- Forum: Writing
- Topic: How do you know your writing is good enough?
- Replies: 32
- Views: 16552
Re: How do you know your writing is good enough?
Hi Chopsy, it's that question that haunts us, isn't it? Probably a critique group could help you shed some light on your doubts. Try it online. You won't see the people there, so the chances for a honest critique are bigger. www.critiquecircle.com is one of those and there you can ask members to con...
- December 10th, 2009, 11:08 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query Review and some helpful hints
- Replies: 11
- Views: 6959
Re: Query Review and some helpful hints
Hi Dave,
thanks for taking a look at this. An internationally spread conglomerate is a company operating in numerous branches around the world.
ronalb
thanks for taking a look at this. An internationally spread conglomerate is a company operating in numerous branches around the world.
ronalb
- December 10th, 2009, 3:38 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query Review and some helpful hints
- Replies: 11
- Views: 6959
Re: Query Review and some helpful hints
Dave, I really hope I could help, but once again, I'm not a professional. And thanks for encouraging me to post my query. I think, if I don't do it now, I never will. so here it comes... And please be direct and open with any suggestions. That's what I need. Dear ..., (here would be the part about t...
- December 9th, 2009, 10:18 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query Review and some helpful hints
- Replies: 11
- Views: 6959
Re: Query Review and some helpful hints
I liked the idea of working through several drafts and the one in the later post about not querying our 'favorite' agents. I like this query and that's I'm taking my time to 'try' to give you some hints and ideas. I'm struggling with my query since months, trying to get it right, so I'm not an exper...
- December 8th, 2009, 4:31 am
- Forum: Writing
- Topic: Writer Support Groups?
- Replies: 21
- Views: 13240
Re: Writer Support Groups?
Having the same problem, I fully understand you. I've personally used www.critiquecircle.com and have learned more about writing in couple of months than I have in couple of years research and reading. Of course, this all based on personal preferences, though. It depends on the person who will read ...