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by ronalb
August 24th, 2010, 10:26 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 278618

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: The Greenberg Conspiracy Genre: Polit-thriller James Brightman glanced at the dimly shimmering digits of the clock on the dashboard of his Jeep. It showed half past nine. He was already thirty minutes late and needed another ten to reach his office in the Lloyd Investment Bank across West Str...
by ronalb
December 18th, 2009, 4:46 pm
Forum: Writing
Topic: How do you know your writing is good enough?
Replies: 32
Views: 6387

Re: How do you know your writing is good enough?

Hi Chopsy, it's that question that haunts us, isn't it? Probably a critique group could help you shed some light on your doubts. Try it online. You won't see the people there, so the chances for a honest critique are bigger. www.critiquecircle.com is one of those and there you can ask members to con...
by ronalb
December 10th, 2009, 11:08 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query Review and some helpful hints
Replies: 11
Views: 3143

Re: Query Review and some helpful hints

Hi Dave,
thanks for taking a look at this. An internationally spread conglomerate is a company operating in numerous branches around the world.

ronalb
by ronalb
December 10th, 2009, 3:38 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query Review and some helpful hints
Replies: 11
Views: 3143

Re: Query Review and some helpful hints

Dave, I really hope I could help, but once again, I'm not a professional. And thanks for encouraging me to post my query. I think, if I don't do it now, I never will. so here it comes... And please be direct and open with any suggestions. That's what I need. Dear ..., (here would be the part about t...
by ronalb
December 9th, 2009, 10:18 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query Review and some helpful hints
Replies: 11
Views: 3143

Re: Query Review and some helpful hints

I liked the idea of working through several drafts and the one in the later post about not querying our 'favorite' agents. I like this query and that's I'm taking my time to 'try' to give you some hints and ideas. I'm struggling with my query since months, trying to get it right, so I'm not an exper...
by ronalb
December 8th, 2009, 4:31 am
Forum: Writing
Topic: Writer Support Groups?
Replies: 21
Views: 5568

Re: Writer Support Groups?

Having the same problem, I fully understand you. I've personally used www.critiquecircle.com and have learned more about writing in couple of months than I have in couple of years research and reading. Of course, this all based on personal preferences, though. It depends on the person who will read ...