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- November 2nd, 2010, 10:34 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
- Replies: 213
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Re: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Mr. Bransford, I would like to submit for consideration for my novel, Bare, a Thriller complete and edited at 64,000 words. Morgan Lee, a twenty-one year old stripper, spends her nights prowling the floor at Bared Intentions. In the club, she's a veritable hunter, stalking her grounds for men willin...
- October 13th, 2010, 9:04 am
- Forum: Writing
- Topic: Make Your Fight Scenes Believable
- Replies: 13
- Views: 5931
Re: Make Your Fight Scenes Believable
I actively train in a mixed martial arts school in Brazilian Jiu Jitsu and I have trained for several years in Muay Thai and had a good number of amateur fights. So I'm not exactly coming from this as a sheltered writer. I think a few of your points overstate the case especially if your character i...
- October 4th, 2010, 4:57 pm
- Forum: Writing
- Topic: Make Your Fight Scenes Believable
- Replies: 13
- Views: 5931
Make Your Fight Scenes Believable
Firstly, I'd like to share my favourite Spam Comment Of The Week : gnaqpdyudkeifhr, space heater, ZzQTjhAlMBkrVcDAudbP. My goodness. Who says flowery prose is passe? Moving on: Fight Scenes. Last night I had the pleasure of taking in Iron Man II, long after I'm sure everyone else has seen it. It was...