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by IanDGSandusky
November 2nd, 2010, 10:34 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 213
Views: 116608

Re: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Mr. Bransford, I would like to submit for consideration for my novel, Bare, a Thriller complete and edited at 64,000 words. Morgan Lee, a twenty-one year old stripper, spends her nights prowling the floor at Bared Intentions. In the club, she's a veritable hunter, stalking her grounds for men willin...
by IanDGSandusky
October 13th, 2010, 9:04 am
Forum: Writing
Topic: Make Your Fight Scenes Believable
Replies: 13
Views: 2789

Re: Make Your Fight Scenes Believable

I actively train in a mixed martial arts school in Brazilian Jiu Jitsu and I have trained for several years in Muay Thai and had a good number of amateur fights. So I'm not exactly coming from this as a sheltered writer. I think a few of your points overstate the case especially if your character i...
by IanDGSandusky
October 4th, 2010, 4:57 pm
Forum: Writing
Topic: Make Your Fight Scenes Believable
Replies: 13
Views: 2789

Make Your Fight Scenes Believable

Firstly, I'd like to share my favourite Spam Comment Of The Week : gnaqpdyudkeifhr, space heater, ZzQTjhAlMBkrVcDAudbP. My goodness. Who says flowery prose is passe? Moving on: Fight Scenes. Last night I had the pleasure of taking in Iron Man II, long after I'm sure everyone else has seen it. It was...