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by tjmurray83
April 10th, 2011, 4:57 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query - God from the Machine
Replies: 5
Views: 980

Re: Query - God from the Machine

Wow! Thanks for the great feedback. I took y'all's advice into consideration and almost completely redid the query. One big mistake I made in that first attempt was trying to invoke a sense of mystery by leaving out key events and back story. I realize now that that was making the entire idea too va...
by tjmurray83
April 9th, 2011, 3:11 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query - God from the Machine
Replies: 5
Views: 980

Query - God from the Machine

Hokay, so, I've run through my manuscript quite a few times, had some beta readers, and I think I'm ready to start querying. But then every time I say the word "query", I start to sweat. I only have on version of my query...here it is: Dear Agent, It’s the future and Ray Thomas is a man obsessed wit...