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- October 5th, 2010, 4:00 am
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: Page Critique Friday 10/1/10
- Replies: 32
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This is not a bad start. It does a pretty good job of building curiosity and suspense, and I think that its anticipated plot about a grandparent's love from beyond the grave will strike a chord with many readers. I would agree with other critiques that suggested some stylistic, grammatical, and stru...