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by Christine H
October 2nd, 2010, 6:24 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Page Critique Friday 10/1/10
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Re: Page Critique Friday 10/1/10

This is a tough one. I kind of like it, and would probably keep reading to find out what happens with the granddaughter, but the backstory in the beginning is a little boring. I don't have a problem with backstory if it's told in a clever voice and draws me in, and this is borderline for me, but jus...